英语短文改错 共有十处

英语短文改错 共有十处

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually (改为usual).At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while (改为when) suddenly I hear (改为heard) someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking (改为shocked) to find a little child strugging in the distance while many people were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation,I had (去掉had) pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but (改为and) jumped into the water quickly.I managedto reach him and carried him back to (加上the)safety.To his (改为my) great relief,the kid was saved. I was proud (加上of) what I had done.I wish (改为hope) everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.保证答案的正确性。